No Sound Effects No audio and poor animation. what you should work on is adding some sound and background music to your videos and maybe add some voices, work on your animation a whole lot, you need it. If You need help look in the flash tutorial section, im sure you will get better after viewing some of those.
The Animation Was Great
The Animation was quite incredible however it should have been way longer instead of a short 2 second movie. my advice go for longer flash movies and keep up the work you will get really good one day.
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